Beautifully cryptic, enticing first paragraph that works in tandem with the title to captivate the…

Cold was the only thing she could feel, weighting her limbs, fogging her senses, distorting her thoughts. Cold pressure against her mouth. A radiating cold of the stone table beneath her. Even the light was cold, streaming through the slits of the turret, draining the stone of hue.
This Sleep of Death
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Beautifully cryptic, enticing first paragraph that works in tandem with the title to captivate the reader’s attention. The hook snagged this here fish!
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Written by Pedro B. Gorman443 Followers
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Re-writing my life & personal narrative. Top Writer in Music. Fiction writer, poet, musician, spoken-word guy, voice-over/audiobook guy.
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